I would like to be a drop of rain,
Full of love, and least pain
Would fall on you,
Starting from forehead,
Through the eyes,
To the cheek rose bed,
From your eyes,
Would steal all dreams,
Halt at your lips,
Silence all the screams,
Moving to the throat,
Would steal the songs unsung,
Then would race down to heart,
On the wall of which, my picture is hung,
Would take my time,
And go round the belly,
To steal the sweetness,
Of residing sweet jelly,
Then as if satisfied,
Not really, to the fullest,
Would wonder along your lavishing curves,
Reach to the feet, would take rest,
And then as you walk on,
Will go to my life’s end,
Absorbed by the mother earth,
With the soul left to suspend....
12 comments:
I think this one is one of my best...
awsome yodhey..
this is indeed the best one
never knew u write so well....
pls write somethng fr me tooo..
great ... really very good
m proud of u
:)
Hey... its really nice... beautiful combination of thoughts and words...
Hey... its really nice... beautiful combination of thoughts and words...
@Dolly : Would write something for you...for that you need to be infront of me.. :)
@Dharati : Thanks! This was long back!
hey it is indeed the best one.It needs hard work to define a rain drop.
I usually dont read.. and vachu to khabar na pade.. but this was indeed the best one.. I came across. Superbly described feeling in words
realy gud one yodhey...
like the way u have put up words and described the whole flow of the drop ...amazing !!
@Jay...thanks a lot bro! This was written by me when I was in BCA.. :)
Undoubtedly the best Ive read of urs....but i think very strongly that u need to write more often than u do dude.
@Janty:
I do plan to do it bro...
But m not doing that these days...
no excuses..but planning to get back to it real soon!
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